Tuesday, March 31, 2015

the students stayed silent.
"ok... zoe how are you doing in school?" mrs. Pitchkin asked.
"uh, fine" Zoe responded plainly.
"fine?" mrs. Pitchkin inquired after a moment. "Just fine?"
"yeah..." Zoe said awkwardly. she looked to jake who shrugged.
"OK, Shawn, how are you feeling?" Mrs.Pitchkin asked turning to Shawn.
"Fine. a bit hungry." he stated.
"but how do you feel about your life?" she prodded leaning forward in her chair.
"great i guess."
"ok then, uh," she sighed and looked around the circle "Kate! how is your mother?"
"Fine. you just saw her."
"ok then..." Mrs. Pitchkin looked up at the ceiling before asking " who hasn't answered a question?"
Dasha and Jake both raised their hands slightly. Dasha looked at Zoe who made a 'i dont know' gesture.
Mrs. Pitchkin looked up, "ok," she thought for a moment before starting, "Daya,
"it's Dasha."
"whatever, do you have any problems with school?" Mrs. Pitchkin finished
"no"
"Ok, well if thats all." She stood up and grabed her clipboard
"Um, Mrs. Pitchkin you didnt ask Jake a question." Dasha said.
Mrs. Pitchkin just rolled her eyes and walked out.
"where's she going" Kate asked after the door closed.
"to eat cereal, and take a nap." jake responded. he then turned to Zoe "that was the fastes ive seen her drop her smiley act yet."
"yeah you're right."

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Friday, March 6, 2015

Chapter 1


         St.James High, a normal school, for normal kids. With normal teachers, and normal activities. Right?
         It was Saturday, 8:00am to be specific, and a beautiful day. most kids would be teens would be sleeping or outside, enjoying the warm bright sun. most teens would not be at school at 8 in the morning at a counseling session. Inside St.James High School five teens waited for the most painful for hours of their lives. the lobby held these teens, five parents, one councilor, and one secretary. At the desk of the lobby stood a well dressed woman in a grey dress suit whispering quietly and intently to the secretary seated behind the desk. the woman's daughter stood next to her quietly listening to their conversation. at the back of the lobby stood a pair of parents and their child. the father stood over the teen talking in hushed , angered tones. in the middle of the room stood another family, the dad in dust covered jeans hugged his son tightly. "i love you son"  the mother hugged the teen and kissed his head. at the wall opposite the desk sat a teenage girl. she glanced at the family at the back again and again, while figiting with the string bad in her lap. finally at the front by the glass doors sat another female. she stared out into the parking lot clutching her phone.
     A woman walked out of a door at the back of the room and anounced, "Alright, everyone!" all too cheerily. "say your 'i love yous' and give your last kisses because we are about to start!"
       the teens and parents parted with a few wispers. the parents walked out into the parking lot and one by one drove off. inside the building the teenagers turned to the councilor.
     "ok, follow me." she said deflating a bit but still keeping her falsely happy tone.
     they started to walk to the door the woman entered. a string bag was slipped into the hands of the child with an angered father "uh, can i go the the bathroom?"
      "sure" the councilor said without turning back. the group walked down the hall to the auditorium. inside the auditorium was a circle made of chairs. the students seated themselves and the councilor sat at the front. the last teen returned from the bathroom and sat down. "Ok! so I'm Mrs.Pitchkin," she said "some of you know me." Mrs. Pitchkin looked around the circle and then continued, "so lets start by saying our names. lets start on this side," she gestured  to her right. "and go around." she turned to her right.
       "uh, I'm Kate" stated the girl from the counter.
       "I'm Shawn" he dusted his jeans thinking of his father's.
       "I'm Dasha" she said still clutching her phone.
       "I'm Jake"
at this Mrs.Pithkin pursed her lips.
Shawn looked up at Jake. his eyes lingered before he looked away again.
       "and I'm Zoe"
       "OK so I'm going to ask you some questions and i want you to answer truthfully." Mrs.Pitchkin said in a fake tone.
     

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Tuesday, February 10, 2015

i have an idea....
for a thing
but im not going to tell you the thing
because i want it to be a surprise.

so im going to write this.

steam rolled off the hull of the ship.even though it was mid summer and i was in the desert i was shivering. a crew bustled about, setting up the ship for the journey. i looked up at the stars , 4am is a good time to look at the stars, i thought. they dazzled in streams of jewls in the sky. this is last time ill see you like this.
the shuttle was ready 30 minuets later. the inside was the definition of regulation. everything was white or grey. the seats that took up most of the cabin were grey metal with grey cushions and grey seat belts. when everyone was seated and buckled in they did one last check before preparing for take off. most of the passengers were alone, sitting with sad or stricken faces. even though almost all of the passengers, including myself, were leaving for a better life, it was difficult leaving the only place you knew.

Friday, February 6, 2015

so far people seem to like the ones about ESD

therefore i will flesh out the story and see if it works

i think i might change it a bit
i like the idea of them being close friends but i want there to be more of a conflict in the whole "i don't want you to come because you will get hurt"  thing.

i also want there to be more conflict between the organization and ________(i need a name.... ugh NAMES)

BUT im going to pick up where i left off
... Marilyn soon went to work  and the apartment was only filled with the sounds of the others sleeping. the others soon awake to find jerry up and dressed. they head out to go to lunch. on the way to lunch a car blows up near them. concreate and flaming metal go flying around them. jerry and kevin start to pick themselves of the groung when ______ yells for them to look out. a man in a black mask jumps over a car and pulls out a dagger. as he tries to swipe at jerry ,she ducks and kevin manages to kick the man's back. he staggers and turns to kevin. just then another man comes out from around another car and grabs Jerry.
jerry and kevin are both at the hands of terrorists and _______ doesnt know what to do.

Friday, January 23, 2015

right now i am working on the intros to my favorite prompts. from there i will try to pick the one i will write.

Friday, January 16, 2015

this might be...

this might be the last idea post before a choose one and flush it out.

this one is about a spy/assassin. and like any spy/assassin story they must go on a mission.
but this is a not your ordinary story.

this Female assassin must complete this mission and deal with prejudice from the  goverment coperation she works for.

there is a group of terrorists growing overseas, they are lead by a their leader called "kaposk".
they intend to destroy America and its government. they believe that everyone not in their group or religion is below them and are filthy.

__________(she doesn't have a name yet... if i don't come up with one y the end of this post comment a name you like) is one of  ESD(Earth's Strategic Defense) {usa unit}'s best agents(spy/assassin). but even though it is 2015 she is still discriminated in her workplace. though she works for the ESD she has friends in the outside world, all of which have specific talents and attributes.

she also has two friends in the ESD.
Kevin and Jerry(Jennifer)
       Kevin is still retentively new to ESD ; though he isn't as well practiced as Jerry or ________ he is very loyal. he likes all types of music but his favorite genre is 70s music. he's lactose intolerance. he enjoys action movies , video games , and going to the park
       Jerry has been at ESD a little while longer than _________ ; she is very skilled with guns and martial arts. she is a great friend. Jerry doesn't have a favorite genre of music. her favorite restaurant is Terelli's (Italian food). she likes all kinds of movies except for cliche romance movies. loves doctor who and homestuck. her favorite sport is volley ball.

Back to plot:

the ESD(and government) is trying to figure out the osk's(name for the terrorist?) next move without actually getting involved. they contemplate and think about it but never actually make a move. some of the younger agents are getting aggravated. along with around three officials. one of these officials, agent Garvel (one of the most liked officials in all or ESD{also a woman}), comes to _________ and tells her she has to make a move. she tells her though she's new and also a former spy that she is who Agent Garvel trusts. she also says because she in new they won't suspect her. 
_________ tries to keep is secret but Jerry and Kevin figure it out. they said that she needs to let them help her. after much persuasion she agrees. they do much research but only find out so much so they decide to do what any normal person that needs information does, they impersonate FBI agents and go to the best hacker they can find and tell him that if he doesn't help them they will have to inflict some "code" they make up on the spot, on him. through him they find out that kaposk works in one of the biggest funding corporation in America and that he was going to be doing something big in about month.
after much "what are we going to do"-ing  they decide to go into new york and try to get a job at this corporation. they all interview but __________ gets the job (and all the time she is taking the interview she is being complimented or checked out). after they take the interview they go have lunch and go to the park to continue research. thats when ________ gets the call that she has been chosen for the job and that she should report to her advisor at 9:00 tomorrow. that's when they realize that they didn't set up a place to stay. Kevin says that he knows someone they could probably stay with he says he'll check to see if (said person) is preforming tonight. {they are} so they head to dasky's pub and club. Kevin leaves them at the table, soon he comes back followed by ,as he introduces her, Marylin. Marylin is preforming in the drag queen show that night. she agrees to let them stay at her apartment. after the show she takes them to her apartment.
the next day Jerry gets up at like 5:30 to find Marylin dressed very sophisticated. jerry asks where she's heading so dressed up. Marylin replies that she works at a youth club for children and teenagers with problems.
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Friday, January 9, 2015

breakfast club / stand by me type thing

- this one is about a group of 5 teenagers that are forced to participate in a counseling group.some were forced by the school and some were forced by their parents. none of them want to be there , all of them have problems in their life , and all have more in common than they think.

-when they are all at the school at 10:00am they sit in the commons room near the library. the councilor comes in and introduces herself. she makes them sit in a circle and introduce themselves. she then asks the "standard " questions. "how do you feel"  "hows your home life"  "is there anything you want to talk about"  "hows school?"  "is there anything about school you want to share"     but the problem is that teenagers don't like to share "secrets" with strangers or smile plastered, fake sympathetic councilors that they are always forced to talk to. after that  the councilor leaves them for "peer comfort" (the councilor was going to eat a microwave meal and take a nap). so now there are 5 teenagers that aren't allowed to leave till twelve o'clock , sitting alone in a random room with other teenagers that are strangers to them. what happens in the next two hours starts a insuperable friendship.

if anyone actually reads these!
do you want to hear more of this ?
or maybe another story?
put if you can please comment to tell me what you like.