so far people seem to like the ones about ESD

therefore i will flesh out the story and see if it works

i think i might change it a bit
i like the idea of them being close friends but i want there to be more of a conflict in the whole "i don't want you to come because you will get hurt"  thing.

i also want there to be more conflict between the organization and ________(i need a name.... ugh NAMES)

BUT im going to pick up where i left off
... Marilyn soon went to work  and the apartment was only filled with the sounds of the others sleeping. the others soon awake to find jerry up and dressed. they head out to go to lunch. on the way to lunch a car blows up near them. concreate and flaming metal go flying around them. jerry and kevin start to pick themselves of the groung when ______ yells for them to look out. a man in a black mask jumps over a car and pulls out a dagger. as he tries to swipe at jerry ,she ducks and kevin manages to kick the man's back. he staggers and turns to kevin. just then another man comes out from around another car and grabs Jerry.
jerry and kevin are both at the hands of terrorists and _______ doesnt know what to do.