we see a young man walk through what looks like a school campus*with bags*.he enters a building , walks down a hallway, and in through a door. inside the door we see a "waiting room".
"um, im here to see the head master." boy
"uh huh. give me a second" she then rolls her chair groaning all the way to the door.she cracks it open looks through wispers something then closes the door. she rolls back to her desk.
"ok go on in"
after he enters the other room she pulls out a womens magazine. *leaves bags*
*in the other room
after the door closes the boy turns to seethe headmaster, feet propped up with a sandwich.
"ok what can i halp u with?" headmaster
"um im supposed to come to you to make sure my placement was put through." boy
"right ur that normal kid," H
"wha..." boy (cut off)
"ok well here's your schedule," *half hands half throws* "uh where's your stuff?"
"out there..."
"ok , here's the school rules" *hands rules* "so uh yeah, if you have any questions just figure them out for yourself." *standing up and "escorting" boy out"
"wait where is my housing?"
"just leave your stuff here till you decide" *shuts door*
the boy turns around to see the lady behind the desk reading her magazine and chewing gum
"so go i go to class?"
"uh huh whatever"
the boy leaves the office/lobby as he walks across the campus he reads the rules *camara shows rules*
"what?"
he passes one student chasing another with a nerf gun.
"what, oh well."
we see him in the hall about to enter a room.as he is about to enter the other students leave the first two out pull him to the side of the hall.
"whoa there newbe," the student with red hair (R)
"what?" B
"your gonna get trampled" the other student said (G)
"i was supposed to go to class" B
"well its lunch now. " G
"we'll show you the way" R *slngs arm around him
they walk off ; we see them sit down at the table.
.............
Friday, April 10, 2015
I have come to the conclusion that i would much rather practice film than write a novel
I have created a film project for an assignment in school, so i will try to link of post it on this blog.
i will also be trying to film more ideas and post it here (they will go along with my ideas i post here)
so, I'm going to plan out some videos instead of updating chapters for a novel
I have created a film project for an assignment in school, so i will try to link of post it on this blog.
i will also be trying to film more ideas and post it here (they will go along with my ideas i post here)
so, I'm going to plan out some videos instead of updating chapters for a novel
Friday, April 3, 2015
ok well I have found I like writing scripts more than books
and that filming is more fun than writing
I guess thats because I'm a visual thinker but I have total writers block on my story so...
I think I'm going to do a trailer for my book project so if I do that I'll post it on here.
im going to go try to write more now
and that filming is more fun than writing
I guess thats because I'm a visual thinker but I have total writers block on my story so...
I think I'm going to do a trailer for my book project so if I do that I'll post it on here.
im going to go try to write more now
"wait so we just stay here?" shawn asked
"i guess, our parents aren't going to pick us up until like what eleven?" zoe asked
"ten" Katie corrected softly.
"what time is it?" Jake questioned.
"almost 9, we started late." Dasha said turning off her phone.
the teens sat quietly. they looked from one to another.
"well what now?" Shawn asked.
"well we could pull a breakfastclub just walk around the school." Zoe said after a few seconds.
"better than anything, right." Shawn said standing up.
"won't we get in trouble?" Katie asked as the others stood up.
"If someone asks... just say its a scavenger hunt." Jake said, then walked towards the door. "so come on team" he said with sarcastic emphasis.
"i guess, our parents aren't going to pick us up until like what eleven?" zoe asked
"ten" Katie corrected softly.
"what time is it?" Jake questioned.
"almost 9, we started late." Dasha said turning off her phone.
the teens sat quietly. they looked from one to another.
"well what now?" Shawn asked.
"well we could pull a breakfastclub just walk around the school." Zoe said after a few seconds.
"better than anything, right." Shawn said standing up.
"won't we get in trouble?" Katie asked as the others stood up.
"If someone asks... just say its a scavenger hunt." Jake said, then walked towards the door. "so come on team" he said with sarcastic emphasis.
Tuesday, March 31, 2015
the students stayed silent.
"ok... zoe how are you doing in school?" mrs. Pitchkin asked.
"uh, fine" Zoe responded plainly.
"fine?" mrs. Pitchkin inquired after a moment. "Just fine?"
"yeah..." Zoe said awkwardly. she looked to jake who shrugged.
"OK, Shawn, how are you feeling?" Mrs.Pitchkin asked turning to Shawn.
"Fine. a bit hungry." he stated.
"but how do you feel about your life?" she prodded leaning forward in her chair.
"great i guess."
"ok then, uh," she sighed and looked around the circle "Kate! how is your mother?"
"Fine. you just saw her."
"ok then..." Mrs. Pitchkin looked up at the ceiling before asking " who hasn't answered a question?"
Dasha and Jake both raised their hands slightly. Dasha looked at Zoe who made a 'i dont know' gesture.
Mrs. Pitchkin looked up, "ok," she thought for a moment before starting, "Daya,
"it's Dasha."
"whatever, do you have any problems with school?" Mrs. Pitchkin finished
"no"
"Ok, well if thats all." She stood up and grabed her clipboard
"Um, Mrs. Pitchkin you didnt ask Jake a question." Dasha said.
Mrs. Pitchkin just rolled her eyes and walked out.
"where's she going" Kate asked after the door closed.
"to eat cereal, and take a nap." jake responded. he then turned to Zoe "that was the fastes ive seen her drop her smiley act yet."
"yeah you're right."
......
"ok... zoe how are you doing in school?" mrs. Pitchkin asked.
"uh, fine" Zoe responded plainly.
"fine?" mrs. Pitchkin inquired after a moment. "Just fine?"
"yeah..." Zoe said awkwardly. she looked to jake who shrugged.
"OK, Shawn, how are you feeling?" Mrs.Pitchkin asked turning to Shawn.
"Fine. a bit hungry." he stated.
"but how do you feel about your life?" she prodded leaning forward in her chair.
"great i guess."
"ok then, uh," she sighed and looked around the circle "Kate! how is your mother?"
"Fine. you just saw her."
"ok then..." Mrs. Pitchkin looked up at the ceiling before asking " who hasn't answered a question?"
Dasha and Jake both raised their hands slightly. Dasha looked at Zoe who made a 'i dont know' gesture.
Mrs. Pitchkin looked up, "ok," she thought for a moment before starting, "Daya,
"it's Dasha."
"whatever, do you have any problems with school?" Mrs. Pitchkin finished
"no"
"Ok, well if thats all." She stood up and grabed her clipboard
"Um, Mrs. Pitchkin you didnt ask Jake a question." Dasha said.
Mrs. Pitchkin just rolled her eyes and walked out.
"where's she going" Kate asked after the door closed.
"to eat cereal, and take a nap." jake responded. he then turned to Zoe "that was the fastes ive seen her drop her smiley act yet."
"yeah you're right."
......
Friday, March 6, 2015
Chapter 1
St.James High, a normal school, for normal kids. With normal teachers, and normal activities. Right?
It was Saturday, 8:00am to be specific, and a beautiful day. most kids would be teens would be sleeping or outside, enjoying the warm bright sun. most teens would not be at school at 8 in the morning
A woman walked out of a door at the back of the room and anounced, "Alright, everyone!" all too cheerily. "say your 'i love yous' and give your last kisses because we are about to start!"
the teens and parents parted with a few wispers. the parents walked out into the parking lot and one by one drove off. inside the building the teenagers turned to the councilor.
"ok, follow me." she said deflating a bit but still keeping her falsely happy tone.
they started to walk to the door the woman entered. a string bag was slipped into the hands of the child with an angered father "uh, can i go the the bathroom?"
"sure" the councilor said without turning back. the group walked down the hall to the auditorium. inside the auditorium was a circle made of chairs. the students seated themselves and the councilor sat at the front. the last teen returned from the bathroom and sat down. "Ok! so I'm Mrs.Pitchkin," she said "some of you know me." Mrs. Pitchkin looked around the circle and then continued, "so lets start by saying our names. lets start on this side," she gestured to her right. "and go around." she turned to her right.
"uh, I'm Kate" stated the girl from the counter.
"I'm Shawn" he dusted his jeans thinking of his father's.
"I'm Dasha" she said still clutching her phone.
"I'm Jake"
at this Mrs.Pithkin pursed her lips.
Shawn looked up at Jake. his eyes lingered before he looked away again.
"and I'm Zoe"
"OK so I'm going to ask you some questions and i want you to answer truthfully." Mrs.Pitchkin said in a fake tone.
...
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